whinge bitch moan

[solarbird]

"Where is your Heaven?" is NOT FUCKING WORKING. This stupid song's lyrics have been going HA HA NO at me for nearly two months now and it's JUST. NOT. WORKING.

<pounds head against wall>

hate hate hate hate hate

I guess it's January and Outbirds on Saturday, then! I like instrumentals but not in open mics. O WELL

Comments

[maellenkleth]

oh, that's sucky, but understandable.

for what it's worth, Where Is Your Heaven didn't seem to scan right when I looked at it on Friday, but at then time I attributed that to trying to read English upside down.

[solarbird]

those lyrics were all SHIT!

but they did scan. the rhythm is complicated.

[batyatoon]

I hate it when that happens. There's a filk of Talis Kimberley's "Small Stowaway" that's been sitting there unfinished for years because I cannot make the words do what I want them to.

:(

[solarbird]

I went at it with an axe and sliced-and-diced it I think I have something now. But damn.