収束ゾーンでのライフ: Life in the Convergence Zone

Honestly, if I were to do a second draft of this story, the previous chapter probably wouldn't've happened yet. It would happen next, and there would be a different target (and action sequence) in chapter 16.

Or, at least, that's my thought at the moment. Basically, I wanted to get Sanjay where I did, but I didn't realise 'till I'd have written it that he was actual Talon board, because that's not super-obvious in his canon content, but it has been confirmed. So I adjusted to note that, and then, yeah. Stuff.

Mostly this is about story mechanics rather than anything else? But those matter.