I did figure you were writing the way it needed to go.
But for coming in without background knowledge, you've made me sympathize with the characters. And Winston in particular has been nothing but constructive and kind, this whole time.
I thought you'd want to know how much effect it had.
Re: remember to breathe
But for coming in without background knowledge, you've made me sympathize with the characters. And Winston in particular has been nothing but constructive and kind, this whole time.
I thought you'd want to know how much effect it had.